In the beginning she was just a face in the crowd
In the beginning I thought she was rude and loud
In the beginning I thought “Just look at her hair!”
In the beginning I thought “A face with no makeup. How rare.”
In the beginning I thought “Intriguing, that smile.”
In the beginning I thought “Maybe I’ll stick around for awhile.”
In the beginning I thought “She seems pretentious.”
In the beginning I thought “A bit insecure, I guess.”
Then you walked over and said, “Hello, I’m Sally!”
Then I thought “Is is possible to be this happy?”
Then I said, “Hello Sally, my name is Tim."
Then she said, “Nice to meet you. Can I see you again?”
Suddenly I realize that she is a friend in the crowd
Suddenly I realize it’s only her music which is loud.
Suddenly I realize I actually like her style of hair
Suddenly I realize her face is beautiful bare
Suddenly I realize the sun is dim compared to her smile
Suddenly I realize I want to be part of her life for a long while
Suddenly I realize what I thought pretentious is actually gregarious
Suddenly I realize my own insecurities in my efforts to impress
Suddenly I realize it might be a big mistake leading with my chin
Then I realize that being together will be great for Sally and Tim.
Tim D. Culey -2013-
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I like the positive thought at the end.
ReplyDeleteI always like your write and this entry is no exception. Very good!!!
ReplyDeleteI like the twist at the end, funny how things change if we keep an open mind!
ReplyDeleteA very cool write as usual;)
ReplyDeleteYour a fabulous writer. I like the twists and turns :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the reading :)
ReplyDeleteNicely written, a good demonstration of how our own perceptions can blind us to reality.
ReplyDeleteWith hope life has meaning.
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