Monday, March 18, 2013

Let's Take a Walk. Creative Challenge #243


I can’t envision you in a dump like this, let’s take a walk

You’re sending off vibes that give me bliss, let’s take a walk

You’re much too fine to be absorbing all these hits, let’s take a walk

Let’s go someplace nice and get out of this pit, let’s take a walk.

 

Let me take you someplace for some cold champagne, let’s take a walk

Just take my hand, and you will relieve me of my pain, let’s take a walk

You make me higher than three lines of cocaine, let’s take a walk

Be gentle with me baby, don’t treat me with disdain, let’s take a walk

 

Lets take a trip to the great out doors, come with me, let’s take a walk

Just take a chance sweetheart, be all that you can be, let’s take a walk

Just open your eyes and be willing and able to see, let’s take a walk

There is grass all around, and even a bird up in the tree, let’s take a walk

 

 

There is fresh air out here baby, absorb that sun shine, let’s take a walk

I want you all to myself honey because you are so fine, let’s take a walk

One question, darling, and I hope you don’t mind, lets take a walk

My question is, Precious, your place or mine? Let’s take that walk.

 

 

 

Tim D. Culey  -2013-

 


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9 comments:

  1. very lyrical...and such a romantic walk :)

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  3. Sorry...I thought it was something I had done to duplicate the comment, but when I deleted one comment, both instances got removed. So I'll say it again:

    It reminds me of something from Ferlinghetti's A Coney Island of the Mind.

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  4. Nicely written with some emotion.

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  5. It must had been a nice walk...I hope you two agreed that romantic place at the end of that walk. :)

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  6. Who wouldn't like to be taken to that walk?

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  7. Oh that was funny. I just loved the way the verse swung along and the hit line at the end.So romantic.

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