Monday, January 14, 2013

Creative Challenge- Sway


As she slowly walked away I was mesmerized by the oscillations

It put my heart into unstoppable paroxysms of fluctuations

I found myself in the midst of nearly uncontrollable weeping

As she marched steadily onward with her skirts sweeping

 

Little did I realize she had the power of complete dominion

Under her influence I found myself  just a total minion

I know I will miss forever the feverish warmth of her lips

As I watch for the last time the hypnotizing  sway of her hips.

 

© Tim D. Culey -2013-
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8 comments:

  1. SofiaJanuary 15, 2013 at 12:17 AM

    Melancholic verses,
    Romantic...

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  2. UnknownJanuary 15, 2013 at 12:38 AM

    Captivating read ... I almost want to read more ~smile~

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    1. Tim .. Another MP RefugeeJanuary 15, 2013 at 5:51 AM

      A classic case of "you doh't know what you've got unti it's gone." Thanks for stopping by.

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  3. tesstruhartzJanuary 15, 2013 at 8:36 AM

    Thoughts churning as you say goodbye, Good one

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 15, 2013 at 9:29 AM

    Thought provoking and interesting.

    http://digitalrodent.blogspot.in/2013/01/wardrobe-malfunction-creative-challenge.html

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  5. Danette January 15, 2013 at 12:38 PM

    great rhyming and a fun read

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2013 at 8:15 AM

    we were on the same page with this prompt!!

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  7. Pat Gerber-RelfJanuary 16, 2013 at 11:05 AM

    I love the usage of the words in that piece. Very expressive

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