Weather
Hot
Summer
I like it!
Winter cold
I like that too!
Bring on summer heat; welcome winter cold
Stay in my arms no matter the weather
I seek no more
You and I
I like it!
Nice!
© Tim D. Culey -2012-
This is an example of a double Tetractys characterized by five lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10 and followed by five lines of 10, 4. 3, 2, 1 syllables.
you like it, summer can tone down its heat a bit.
ReplyDeleteHappy Birthday Tim...hope it's been a grand day...not too hot,not too cold..perfect.
ReplyDeleteThe great part of summer is taking off your clothes one item at a time ...
ReplyDeleteall the seasons are likeable I suppose :)
ReplyDeleteTo paraphrase the song traditionally sung at Xmas ..."The weather outside is frightful and the A/C is so delightful and since we have no place to go ..." the rest is up to you!
ReplyDeleteEvery season has something which makes me say "I like it". Great write.
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You have four seasons and we have only two, the dry and wet. I always love to spend winter time with my family in Australia...I like the feel of the snow...
ReplyDeleteBy the way, happy birthday!
I used to prefer summer, but with age I see that Winter has its qualities. I too like them both and also like your poem.
ReplyDeleteGood One.....I like fall and spring myself...lol
ReplyDeletelove is good in any weather indeed
ReplyDeletegood write!
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